1) The lead did draw me into the story. It made me want to find out what situation warrants wearing only a jockstrap
2) My favorite quote would be “Ali,” she said, laughing. “Just don’t get the whip on the food.” It's simple but it gets the point across. It shows the grandmother in understanding and accepting of Mustaq's lifestyle without actually saying it.
3) The angle is Ali Mustaq's life in the gay leather community. It covers how he got into it, the hardships he faced when trying it and what he plans to do.
4) "Mushtaq flexed his biceps and shimmied his hips. A man shoved a few dollar bills at him, and Mushtaq’s sultry visage melted into a sincere, delighted smile. He giggled as he knelt down to chat with the man." This was the best description because of it's flavorful text. It paints a vivid image in your head about what Mustaq is trying to do.
5) Five people were quoted.
2) My favorite quote would be “Ali,” she said, laughing. “Just don’t get the whip on the food.” It's simple but it gets the point across. It shows the grandmother in understanding and accepting of Mustaq's lifestyle without actually saying it.
3) The angle is Ali Mustaq's life in the gay leather community. It covers how he got into it, the hardships he faced when trying it and what he plans to do.
4) "Mushtaq flexed his biceps and shimmied his hips. A man shoved a few dollar bills at him, and Mushtaq’s sultry visage melted into a sincere, delighted smile. He giggled as he knelt down to chat with the man." This was the best description because of it's flavorful text. It paints a vivid image in your head about what Mustaq is trying to do.
5) Five people were quoted.
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